Thats so emotional and honest - sorry about your grandpa. this is seriously strong writing :)

I liked it, I thought it was sad and yeah it was strong, even know you probably didn't know it when you were writing it, the wishes really show that out, and because your wishes are so conciderate and loving and are so desperate, it holds such a strong power of the readers. And I for one was held over...

My quote/poem to you would have to be..

No one lives forever,
You can wish as hard as you like,
But even the most loved have to go,
And close there eyes and aboard that last flight.

This is a really good poem

5/5