Die F-cking Trying

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Feb 12, 2007


This is more of a vent poem.. So, enjoy.
And, this is in the 'explicit' sections because of some of the language. Enjoy.
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The sky can turn the blackest of nights and your threats of tomorrow will always shoot me down,
But I'll hold my head high and practice as I fall, no longer will I let you push me around.

Cry to me and I'll cry the sorriest tears to you; forget who you are and speak through your emotions,
You'll be most surprised what you find, with your dirty thoughts and faithless notions.

Breathe with every deep breath and live until the end of your days with a smile on your face,
Open your arms to all that you can do and let love be the last thing that you embrace.

Be faithful to my memory and don't give up, love me for me, or not at all,
I'll be your perfect little angel if you love me with your heart, I'll be your little doll.

Hold your head high and accept what fate has given you; pray you suffer more;
Do not fight against all the odds -- until death do us part, f-cking w|h|o|r|e.

Take a deep breath now, with a smile on your face and know you are dying,
Let yourself live the way you are; love me for me or die f-cking trying.

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  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Haha. So powerful & angry! I love it. The flow was really good. & for a vent poem.. it was just excellent.

    It was very heartfelt & was so deep.

    Great job, Hun.

    Bri x

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this!
    The anger can be seen clearly behind the words, and I thought this had a lot of emotion and depth behind it.
    The first stanza was such a great opener, and it just kept getting better and better!

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Now I really liked this poem definatly a 5/5. The flow was really good. Yet the sentences were kind of long but oh well.

  • 17 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    I thought for a vent poem it was actually pretty catchy. The language wasn't too bad with it seemed to be bleaped out.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Wow so honest
    But yet so good
    Well done honey