Wow so honest
But yet so good
Well done honey

I thought for a vent poem it was actually pretty catchy. The language wasn't too bad with it seemed to be bleaped out.

Now I really liked this poem definatly a 5/5. The flow was really good. Yet the sentences were kind of long but oh well.

I loved this!
The anger can be seen clearly behind the words, and I thought this had a lot of emotion and depth behind it.
The first stanza was such a great opener, and it just kept getting better and better!

Haha. So powerful & angry! I love it. The flow was really good. & for a vent poem.. it was just excellent.

It was very heartfelt & was so deep.

Great job, Hun.

Bri x