Two a.m.

by christopher dflcs   Feb 12, 2007


The coffee burned
its first time down
soon it faded
all that was left
a feeling
a memory
then nothing
nothing
no more

the empty cup
so soon discarded
dropped and forgotten
like old news
or a childhood friend

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  • 16 years ago

    by Savannah Kate

    I thought this poem is amazing! very creative! hehe loved it! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ed or Ian Henderson

    This has the makings of a good piece. You clearly have the imagination to write some pieces that are mature beyond your years, but this starts out well and ends so abruptly, and on such an evocative fact of life that I felt I was reading something completely unfinished.

    It is no way bad poetry, but it is far from "short but sweet".

  • 17 years ago

    by josh

    Chris defalco is the best poem writer. ever. this poem is amazing. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Woow... i have to admit that the poem caught my attention and OMG have you got talent or what!!! woow... short, yet beautiful! im definitely impressed! keep it up.
    -xXx-

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