Woow... i have to admit that the poem caught my attention and OMG have you got talent or what!!! woow... short, yet beautiful! im definitely impressed! keep it up.
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Chris defalco is the best poem writer. ever. this poem is amazing. 5/5

This has the makings of a good piece. You clearly have the imagination to write some pieces that are mature beyond your years, but this starts out well and ends so abruptly, and on such an evocative fact of life that I felt I was reading something completely unfinished.

It is no way bad poetry, but it is far from "short but sweet".

I thought this poem is amazing! very creative! hehe loved it! 5/5