Blown away

by EMO   Feb 13, 2007


He was just peacefully sitting on a wall.
Not knowing that soon everything would go wrong,
While around the corner came a sound,
He started to think that he was not alone,
When out burst thugs packing heat all around.
They nearly shot him, stole his money and said with a frown:
What now, your down on the ground?,
They left him with nothing in his wallet and then, left, without a sound.
He thought to himself,
I need to turn my life around, if I left, no one would know, no one would ask.
I would just become, a thing, of the past.
And there he stood all night and all day, Thinking to himself, how he was almost, BLOWN AWAY¦

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  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Ah well done, this poem had a lot of emotion and the way you set it out was excellent. i loved the ending the most. so strong and purposeful.

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    I cant to see you have such a bad vote grade. i am giving all your poems a 5!

    5/5 David