This is good....like really good. |
by Tamsin
Have you ever realised suddenly that God is trying to get a message through to you? I read your poem, and had the odd wonderful feeling that it was coming from God through your writing. I've been struggling with depression for a while now, and suicide has often seemed like the only option. I have been searching for answers and meaning, and I think I just might have found it. So thank you, for sharing your poem. Its great. |
by Michelle
Yeah, you showed me this poem and truly I really liked it. Im sure many people feel the same things in this poem and can really relate. If they read this it might help them through with whatever they are going through because it has really good wording and rhyming. nice work, keep it up. |
I enjoyed this poem it is excellent thats y it won 2nd place in my contest |
Wow you wouldn't believe how much I love this poem it is really good best one I have seen so far on here! |
by Asher
Beautiful... |
This is a really good poem...i like it alot...5/5 |
by H E Losey
I understand your story but, to me, your rhythm is all over the place making it a difficult read. |
Loved this! So beautiful :) |
Loved this! So beautiful :) |
by Lauren
Not only are you attractive, you can write. this was quite exquisite. |
by Burning Angel
I really like this poem :) |