Destiny

by Tripp   Feb 13, 2007


I want all the criticism you can offer on this...

Your heart and mine
right here together
making each other shine
from now until forever

I'll wait for you, until the end of time
I'll wait right here for you
because you're the special girl of mine

So proud to call you my own
I love just being with you
Or just hearing your voice on the phone
Holding your hand on our silent walks
and looking forward more and more
to each one of our talks

I'll do whatever it takes, to prove my love
I'll do whatever it takes,
to show you what this love does

You're my angel, and my special girl
you're that hidden fortune
That others have to search the world
And I found you right here
right here in New Fairfield
in a place that was so near

Well the truth is
I think we were made for each other
because truthfully, I can see myself
with no other
Maybe it's just me, maybe I'm blind to see
but at least in my blind eyes,
this seems like destiny.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    I thought it was very nice and beautiful. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    I 4 1 don't see anything to criticize! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I know that feeling, its amazing....wow great work nice imeragery and wonderful flow. very unique keep it up.

    melissa

  • 17 years ago

    by aisyned

    Great job!!!! i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!