Wow thats very sad. nice poem. especially these lines

he broke my heart just like that,
he used me like he used a mat

i luv those two lines, the analogy tht u used in it... keep writing!

I like it n im pretty sure ur too young to get ur heart broken he's sum stupid little boy who knows nuthin...there's plenty of guys out there n plenty of time...u got a e-mail or myspace...id like to get to know u

This made me sad.
i don't think you give yourself enough credit.
this is a really good poem.:)

keep up the good work hun.
you've got talent.
<3.
:]

--Tay

Little boys out grow little toys. don't worry. he'll see you for who you are maybe. and if he doesn't, he's blind and not worth the time. keep your head up. this is beautiful.

butterfly kisses and bear hugz