by Ian Robert Feb 13, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
Ive been waiting here on the edge of eternity, |
Amazing i lvoed every line. |
by fearose
This is a very well-penned poem however, it seems a little stressed for rhymes. Rhymes should be easy and flowing but some of these seem a little over the top. Especially the reference to the US in a fantasy poem seems odd. Overall, very good. 5/5 |