This is a very well-penned poem however, it seems a little stressed for rhymes. Rhymes should be easy and flowing but some of these seem a little over the top. Especially the reference to the US in a fantasy poem seems odd. Overall, very good. 5/5

Amazing i lvoed every line.

You have pure talent.

xx3Lauren

i would say more. but i have to go. =[
-ps i nominated you for weekly contest winner. =]