Again outstanding, I love all your poems that I have read, your word choice here was wonderful, and the flow was excellent, and the emtion was strong perfect. 5/5

Your love is a song I'll forever sing,
To me its the sweetest tune.

I love those 2 lines.. very very sweet. Once again.. amazing job. You can really take an emotion and describe it so well with such ease. =]

One word. Beautiful. Emotion portrayed was stunning and flawless. The flow and structure outstand as always.

If the stars should fall from the sky,
To crush my hopeful dreams,
Then in this tree is where I'll die,
With my heart torn at the seams.
good job really,keep it up

Those lines were fab. Well done. THis was a great poem which i enjoyed reading. Interesting. 5/5~mel

Very sweet poem.. not my favorite it seemed like it was just really simple.. also this line "On my heart your initials I will engrave," is like one sylablle too long.. but besides that the flow was fine and the rhymes were good..

It was beautiful, very nicely penned and very well worded, 5/5

The best poem ive read in a while. bravo! im adding this one to my favorites. this was sweet. the flow and rhythm and rhyming made it pretty. and the words made it beautiful. which ever girl you give this poem to, i dub her one of the luckiest girls.

293741927340285/5 =] I'm adding you to my favorites.

This is a really sweet poem. excellent job!

The rhyme and flow were good
except the irst stanza seemed a tad bit off to me
I don't know maybe I'm the only one who sees it
but this poem was good
the message/story line w/e is really good
nice work

Poise was put in this and emotion was intwined in the words great job!!!

laura

Wow, it was beautifully written, your a talented writer, the way you express the emotions. it is just awesome, 5/5

The moon glows a stunning white,
In the wind I whisper your name,
In my heart a fire you did ignite,
I'll now never look at love the same.

my fave lines^^

Natural flow with this poem great work wonderful use of words
5/5

Very nice poem... I love this one also... it's amazing! Your poems are all so beautiful... Very well written... as always 5/5!

*tear*amazing emotion went into this poem.

Good poem