This poem is rich in word usage and i loved some specific lines such as:
"Slow resonant notes gleam in brimming eyes,
Watching as within her heart promptly dies,"
AND
"The sound of her tears, the only other sound."

those lines are so put together that its just amazing... i love it... i also liked the end part where you said u would have asked for a hug had u not been so shy... it reminded me of myself a few yrs back where if a guy even looked at me i would turn red... lol.

great poem again Christie... u have a wonderful way of expressing yourself through your poems...

hope to see more...

A.

Wow! Great poem! I liked it. Well, again I agree with A Fallen Angel, and I say that because I could never really put why I like the poem when I comment. I'm bad at it. Lol. Keep writing though, you're great it.

I thought it was a really good composition. there was just enough rhyme to keep it flowing. nice job!

I loved this poem of yours. It was great....that's all I've really got to say.... amazing.

One of those poems that makes you just want to say 'awwwh' out loud. Loved it.
The flow && rhyme really worked. Good job 5/5 x