Wow, this is an amazing poem, it is very dark and the imagery you create is fantastic, i really liked your point of view in this poem, it was an interesting work. ^^glad ur not serial killer tho :P

You deff. kept me hooked til the end. i had to finish it. nice job.

You deff. kept me hooked til the end. i had to finish it. nice job.

To both of you. wat a wonderful poem. you two seem to be able to meld both of your styles of writing to make one perfect piece.

keep writing. 5/5 David