Comments : Why she died

  • 17 years ago

    by Cheris Blair

    Hey kool poem your by bfffffff lol!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sabree

    Once again i must confess that this lacks emotion. You seem to have strong feelings about this tragic loss...yet you are unable to truly put it into words. Strengthen your vocabulary just a tad...try to make it more empowering. You are a grand poet in the making.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cheris Blair

    Its a lil confusing mike!!!<333bye

  • 16 years ago

    by Cheris Blair

    Heyy bree whatever the your real name is go away dont be jealous that mike has talent and your jealous...ooo WHAT!..
    good poem mike .. xxoo <33