Comments : The mistake.

  • 17 years ago

    by why is life so miserable

    I love this one when i reed it it makes me feel well wow awesome poem :)
    cynthia m.

  • 17 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Okay, so this poems about a mistake... that ruined alot of peoples lives... and how you regret it because you acted without thinking...and now you want to kill yourself?

    I don't know what the rhyme scheme was but it seemed to flow nicely. Honestly, I don't know what to say about this... But the imagery was nice, and it showed alot of emotion. well-done...

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelsea

    I like the imagery in this poem-yeah, I know I'm not really being all that helpful XD
    It's pretty, and it flowed nicely. Good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Mack Bopape

    Running out of words, let me just stick to the point: it veryis my sessi!