by Jenni Feb 13, 2007
category :
Special events /
christmas
What an amazing wonder to find, |
by Brigitte
That was a really beautiful poem, your flow was great, and I had no idea that mistletoe was a state flower! I especially loved your poem because of how unique it is, and you left out cliché rhyming words. It was very enjoyable. Just one idea, when you say "People forget what it's there for." It doesn't really fit the poem... Because you say that, and then go into how much joy it brings people and how they kiss under it. So in the rest of the poem it certainly sounds like people know what it's there for. Other than that very nice job! 5/5 |
Excellently penned. It flowed really well, and overall was just a pleasure to read. Keep up the good work. |
by Cindy
Nice job on your poem. |
by Delie
Yes that one simple flower does bring on alot of happiness to the world! and beatiful kisses too...lol :P |
I never thought a poem about mistletoe could be so good lol I'd put up some mistletoe and kiss myself if I wrote this beauty lol nice work 5/5 |