Comments : Mistletoe: Oklahoma's State Flower

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Great job, i really loved it, it was a great poem. great flow, great wording, all around great job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Loved the flow...
    the whole poem atcually put a smile on my face today...
    its really good... you got a talent there...
    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    It was great all the poems ive read so far of yours are wonderful you are a talented writer, keep them coming
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I never thought a poem about mistletoe could be so good lol I'd put up some mistletoe and kiss myself if I wrote this beauty lol nice work 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    Yes that one simple flower does bring on alot of happiness to the world! and beatiful kisses too...lol :P
    well done

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nice job on your poem.

    It is held above so many doors,
    People forget what it's there for.
    To most it is a moment of bliss,
    Underneath to share one single kiss.

    I did not know that mistletoe was a state flower. Great write!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Excellently penned. It flowed really well, and overall was just a pleasure to read. Keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brigitte

    That was a really beautiful poem, your flow was great, and I had no idea that mistletoe was a state flower! I especially loved your poem because of how unique it is, and you left out cliché rhyming words. It was very enjoyable. Just one idea, when you say "People forget what it's there for." It doesn't really fit the poem... Because you say that, and then go into how much joy it brings people and how they kiss under it. So in the rest of the poem it certainly sounds like people know what it's there for. Other than that very nice job! 5/5