Wind and thin, i like it. it makes sense to the rest of the poem and it rhymes too.

5/5 David

Great job with tihs one i like your style and the way you piece your ideas together. good good good

This is a powerful piece...
pulled the right strings...
loved it
5/5
love
amy

Aww such a sad poem, but it's really deep. i can defiantly relate to this! i could tell this was written from your heart! 5/5

~Kristina

Very beautifully wriiten and very straight forward. Keep up the great work.

This reminds me of one of my friends. i love it..keep up the good work!

I absolutely love this one!
amazing words.
-deadbeatromance

Wow. this seems like a prayer i would say. great way of putting all that into your poem. its really good. keep up the writing.