Dang, this poem really packs a punch! where to start.. I loved how you relayed life to a battle field and that taking a chance can go good or bad but life is just too short to wait. amazing, 5/5! =)

I didn't get at all where you were trying to get at all here. I'm sorry. But personally I'd try to tell people what you really want them to see. The flow was pretty good. And the words were really good. So I give you credit for that.

An absolute amazing poem,well written.
Seems to be aimed at someone or THING. Very vivid but very good

This...was frikken amazing!
The way you compared life to a battle field was wonderfully done, and the imagery in this blew me away.
The flow was flawless, and the whole poem is just..perfect.

This is e f f i n' amazing, hun. I love the meaning & comparison of it. The imagery deffinitley just.. blew me away!

Amazing flow. Your vocabulary was very strong & powerful.

Great job, Hun.

Bri x

OMG :| this poem blew me away , this was amazing! there nothing i don't love about it, i love the story line, I love poems like these, great job. Keep writing, your really good at it! i'm gonna check out more of your work :)

5/5 :)