Die backstabber

by Independence Forever   Feb 13, 2007


I'm sick and tired of your attitude
same poems no matter the longitude or latitude

they're always the same, i have run out of advice for them
how about you write about something different, grow your inspiration stem

i joke on your poems but only in jest
it's not my fault they are nowhere near the best

so you put complain on all my posts
which makes you lord of all bad hosts

forget you, your poems are only about sadness and love lost and found
your poems are so predictable, why don't you tread on some new ground

hang you and your poems, i hope everyone gives you the could shoulder
i tried to be a friend and you just discarded me and simply treated me colder

in homage to a fellow poems and quotes member who treated me like garbage and flaunts his rating and poems above me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Sorry, you were treated this way. Don't let you get to you. youre a great writer. Writing this was a good way to use that anger.
    5/5 always
    your favorite friend
    Kate~

  • 17 years ago

    by Black night

    Hey Man, your poems are great, regardless of what that jerk off had to say about them. Most people who read a poem dont comment or vote, so the success of your poem isnt measured by its score, but by how many people it touched. And trust me, i think your poems inspire more than his/hers. Keep writin for the lord, is a real encouragement.
    God bless, and know that i'm one more person who has you as favourite.
    Take care.
    -Black night-

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