Wounded

by Maiden Of Darkness   Feb 13, 2007


Heart stopped beating,
She stops breathing,
Wounds still bleeding,
Is this death she's meeting?

Friends start crying,
Friends start screaming
Is she dying?
Is she leaving?

The paramedics arrived,
But not soon enough
She has already gone,
leaving the one's she had loved

Her wandering soul
Is all that is left
Of the mangled body
That now lays to rest.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Wow...such a sad poem. I love the way you write. You use such powerful and strong dicton. Very moving poem un. Keep it up. Nik

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Perfectly written. I loved the rhyming, it was a good choice of words. It was one powerful poem. Great JOb! 5/5

    -Sarah A.

  • 17 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Wow...That was fantastic. The emotions were so strong and flowed so perfectly and it transports the reader into the world of the poem ^_^ I loved that =) A perfect 5 ^_^
    Rhea

  • 17 years ago

    by Maiden Of Darkness

    Thank you!

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Well written, I like the rhyme. 5/5 Keep writing!

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