Well written, I like the rhyme. 5/5 Keep writing!

Thank you!

Wow...That was fantastic. The emotions were so strong and flowed so perfectly and it transports the reader into the world of the poem ^_^ I loved that =) A perfect 5 ^_^
Rhea

Perfectly written. I loved the rhyming, it was a good choice of words. It was one powerful poem. Great JOb! 5/5

-Sarah A.

Wow...such a sad poem. I love the way you write. You use such powerful and strong dicton. Very moving poem un. Keep it up. Nik