by Tricky Daze Feb 13, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
No one can help me,nobody can hear my voice |
That was really sad, i hope it not from personal experience. It had a really nice flow to it and it was really unique. i liked it 5/5 |
by MyDevotion
I was surprized when it starting flowing so nicely and its got a nice point! i love it! =) thank you for my comment by the way =) 5/5 |
by Cella Bella
Good write! A lot of emotion in this one. Altough, it didn't too well in some parts. 5/5 |
by amoxi
I thought this was a great poem but i got kind of confused but that was prolly just me for i just woke up lol but it was good keep it up |
by Mousie
It was good, but i didn't really get it. it wasn't clear as to what was happening. the flow was a little off too, i had to reread in some places... just look over it again, it was a good write though |