I love you
by mike Feb 13, 2007
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I love you were the words she said the next day me parents said mike I'm sorry shes died. i will always remember that girl who said i love you. i always thought why this girl would never get out of my thoughts and then i realized i loved her to |
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17 years ago
by Sabree
It lacks rhythm...and emotion. Your tone seems dead. You should try to spice it up just a little. It has true feeling to it deep underneath...you just need to uncover it. Such a tragic story.
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17 years ago
by mike
Omg this is so good
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17 years ago
by kelsey
OMG I CRIED THIS IS GOOD KELSEY
