by lisa Feb 13, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I'm paralyzed by your smile. |
This is a great poem, definately used good expressions. well done! |
by Jenni Marie
''I'm excited when your hear'' Should be ''I'm excited when you're here.'' |
by Kirsty
Brilliant. Short but certainly very sweet. 5/5 :) |