Comments : Back Alley Beautiful (Acrostic)

  • 17 years ago

    by Kirsty

    Perfect. Loved it!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Too good!!!
    5/5

    God bless u

  • 17 years ago

    by shatteredsoul

    I thought it was great, you have good writing skills!
    I liked this part best though,
    "beatiful she is
    even to this day
    an angel such as her
    unloved and un-understood"

  • 17 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    It never fails, every poem ive read of your is truely good, and i love acrostic, this one is perfect, i ive it a 5/5!!! keep writing joe!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    Pretty good description, I got a good picture in my head for an acrostic poem, since they are kind of limited. The "A" kind of threw me off, but other than that it was pretty good. It's kind of hard to critique this type of poem. Keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by thirstyvampiregirl

    Wow that was rele good. rates high

  • 17 years ago

    by Cattiebrie

    Acrostics are difficult, well done! not crazy about un-understood, but other than that, I really enjoyed it! nice read

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Nice job on the acrostic form Joe!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Awesome Joe. as i nominated you for Poem of the week. =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    Another good poem, Joe. Dunno what to say. this was kinda more different than your other acrostics. But a good write nonetheless. Keep writing!!!

    -` Liz

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    I liked this! I always love reading Acrostic poems, they really show me which writers have the best talent, & i must say, you are one of them!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Inside the Liar

    Aw. I loved the title, for one thing. 'Back Alley Beautiful.' It has a nice ring to it. I loved the last lines the best, the ones that spelt out beautiful. Nice work. Beautiful poem. 5/5