Comments : My First Valentine

  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Wow,you're doing really great,it's so sweet and touching,especially those

    My heart beats only for you to find me.
    I can only see the love you give my life.
    Your hand flusters mine as they meet.
    And your kiss gets sweeter into the night.

    I liked it alot,well done 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Roses, cards, teddy bears don't add up.
    They don't compares to what you do.
    If I never got a gift in my life again.
    I'd be happy just to know I have you."

    Ooo, i can relate to that stanza!
    The whole poem was just full of sweetness. Just the kind i like =)
    5/5
    *Gem*