Bullet To My Valentine {Rondeau}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Feb 14, 2007


Pull the tricky trigger -- danger to your head
With a kiss and a blow, like that I was dead.
Throw them onto the bed for a faithless [[whoa]],
To the other person, [[shhh]] they'll never know.
When destiny met fate in its debut, you fled,
With a bullet to your heart and "f-ck you" to go.

"Weather's nine below insanity," god said,
"Might as well just put a gun straight through your head,"
Sleep with another when you loved me long ago.

... Pull the tricky trigger.

Take bullets for me -- your feelings go unread;
Whisper the candy sweet words to him instead,
Make an army of hearts and lies to bestow,
Set dangerous fires of fake hearts aglow
With a kiss and a blow, like that I was dead.
... Pull the tricky trigger.

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  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    I enjoyed this poem... It seems slightly sarcstic (hmm).

    I think you have an excellent vocabulary. I don't really know what to say. Usually, i look for spelling err's in poems but i can't seem to find any errors.

    5/5
    ~Stephen White

    (oh well, congrats on the contest.)

  • 17 years ago

    by Fredy

    Wow, the way you told a story like that in such a nice way, the flow of the poem kept me reading the poem over and over again. great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Wow.. I'm speechless haha.. This was just so amazing. It flowed wonderfully & I loved the structure of it. I think it was flawless.

    You deffinitley have a way with words.
    This touched me. I also really loved the title of it. Very catchy.

    Awesome job. Keep it up.

    Bri x

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I'm seriously in awe at this...
    It was beautifully written, the first line had me captivated and while I didn't want this to end, I wasn't disappointed when it did.
    I liked the repetition, I thought it made the poem a lot more powerful, and the imagery you used was fantastic.
    I think this just became my favourite of your's.

  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    This could definately become lyrics. well written! 5/5

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