This is good poem, but it seems like you're trying to hard for this guy and trust me looks arent everything. try finding a guy that will treat you well, you'll be much happier that way

I liked it alot and i know it hurts because love stinks but nice poem 5/5
*kaila*

Very nice....expresses allllllot of emotion. Keep writing I want to read more.

So sad!! Really good though. Hope everything works out for you!!!!!

Alot of emotion. well written and sad. keep writting 5/5

Oh my gosh, totally sums up my relationship with this one stupid buttface that I can't get over. Great poem, it really flows well and you really convey a lot of feeling.