This is my favorite part of your poem
"remember the fifty-four men who put their lives on the line
so that we could be free to take a drink of freedom's wine "very well written check out my poem called thank you if you will i need advice. it doesnt sound right but you i trust to let me know what it needs thank you and agian well written

it's so true we do take advantage of things so little but once meant so much. I enjoyed this one!
5/5 always
your fav friend
Kate~

You know ive never knew anything about this day i guess because i live in australia but you really gave me the run down on what this days about and what it means. For that i give you a well done. ~mel