Heaven's surprise

by Independence Forever   Feb 14, 2007


Here in a minute, gone in a flash
appearing just as quick in heaven's mash

bright and shiny, this could only be one place
to wards the gate i see many a familiar face

people whom i touched while on earth's trials and tribulations
come to welcome me in heaven's gates with many congratulations

some i helped with a few words, others with a lifetime of service
as i see them all and hear their words i somehow feel nervous

how could i have helped so many, i am but one man
but as many will say, i did just what many a man can

but i did it willingly, no reward expected to fill my coffers
for up in heaven, the gifts i get are by many offers

i weep uncontrollably, my happiness cannot be equaled
but as soon as the meetings begin a mighty man is signaled

you had your sins paid for, enter heaven with no fetters, peter states
for in heaven is no suffering, no devil or sin can reach through these gates

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  • 17 years ago

    by Daniel J

    Nice poem, and great ideas flowing in there. As someone said, I can only wonder if that is what it's really like...

  • 17 years ago

    by aisyned

    Great poem! i love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    It really will be an exciting time, huh? Nice write
    5/5 always
    your fav friend
    Kate~

  • 17 years ago

    by Black night

    Great poem. I know, I cant wait for that time to come, for those endless parties at the pearly gates. lol.
    Keep up the faith, let nothing disuade you, for without our strength in God, we will surely fall.
    Your poems encourage me mate, bn goin through some hard times.
    God Bless
    -Black night-

  • 17 years ago

    by Lemon Squeezy

    Sweet i agree great poem david