Death was you, light was I

by Yuna   Feb 14, 2007


You cannot rewind the past
it's true,
you cannot replace the broken
you've used

The knife that you used
to tear me apart
was the same one you used
for those other girl's hearts.

At first I was sad
and would distance myself,
until that one day
when I finally found out

I felt angry and stupid
and all full of shame
because I fell for the guy
who I would soon come to blame

Can you really believe
you'll get all that you want,
all of the money
and someone to taunt?

Stay away from me next time
and I'll be alright
because without you here
there will always be light.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Tsukuyomi

    =/ Heart Break is BS

  • 17 years ago

    by X2892

    I thought it was good, but there were few mistakes in it like the grammar, u can also put some . or ; in it because it would make it better n would understand it more clearly.
    u get a 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    ''I felt angry and stupid
    and all full of shame
    because I fell for the guy
    who I would soon come to blame''

    I loved that stanza, it really stood out.
    I thought the imagery was nicely done, and that the whole piece flowed very well.