''I felt angry and stupid
and all full of shame
because I fell for the guy
who I would soon come to blame''

I loved that stanza, it really stood out.
I thought the imagery was nicely done, and that the whole piece flowed very well.

I thought it was good, but there were few mistakes in it like the grammar, u can also put some . or ; in it because it would make it better n would understand it more clearly.
u get a 4/5

=/ Heart Break is BS