The Bottle

Short and simple, but also very lovely. The emotion of the poem was strong. *5/5*

Alyson

Aghh. A simple poem. There doesn't seem to be a complex feel to it what so ever, and I think on this site that is for the best. And for the subject, it will get the message across more.
There's nothing really critisism wise I can say because it is such a simple poem....
Thanks for sharing.

Ooh yeah...if you could look at my recent poems in return please, any will do. Thanks.

This poem was excellent its so true that people who drink ruin a lot of things i know for my father drank and me and my siblings and my mothers lives were hurt by it, and now my 2 brothers have grown and they too have took to drinking, it ruins a lot of things and its very sad, i loved the poem 5/5

Oh wow. every word you used here was so awesome. i loved the description and the end gave me the chills! wonderful write nontheless! 5/5

Yeah i felt that fear,and it is really interesting too..especailly those

A man sees
A shattered dream,
Bottle will solve it
A chance to scream.

Really good,keep it up