Lookin at the stars

I sit and look up at the stars
wishing, wishing i was that far
so all the pain could stay
and i could go,
oh how i wish i could go that far
all the way to the stars
to were there is no pain to be found
not one lie could be told
and u wouldn't unfold
just because someone you loved so very much tore your heart apart...........

*****I know this poem isn't that good.....but can u please tell me what u think********