Hey hey hey! very good job with this one here.. i love how you tell the story and all in a very good format i love it 4/4! excellent!!!
-Marina.

Tehe thanks hun =]

kep and out for my next one its not a poem more like of a ... guess you have to wait aye ahahah

I really loved it, great use of words.
5/5 for me well done!

This was amazing
i could really tell how you feel
i hope you keep writing

Aw, this was really cute!! It was so sincere and beautiful. I've felt this way about, oh maybe, 2 guys in my entire life! I don't let my heart go to just anyone, you know! :)

Anyways, I told you I would read some of your poems (and I'm glad I did!). This one was adorable!