Cupids Curse

by Gem   Feb 14, 2007


Cupid was always picking on me
And shooting his arrows awry
He didn't seem to care who he hit
And didn't care if he made me cry

Making me fall in love with the guys
Who were never the right ones for me
I was so sick of being under cupids curse
All i wanted was just to be free

Free to find the guy who would care
And love me with all of his heart
But Cupid just wouldn't leave me alone
He kept shooting his troublesome darts

Until one day at the start of the year
He had someone new in his sight
He brought me someone different for once
For the first time he got it right

So now years later on looking back
I see how helpful Cupid could be
It was just a game of trial and error
To find the right person for me ©

*Gem*

(For a contest)

14/01/07
10.33am

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow...loved it. i loved how it went from being like...BAH stop picking on me...to like a thank you. i justr loved this, the wording was great. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl this was really good i loved every word in every line. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    What a lovely valentine's dedication...this is really so sweet, as always love reading your poems.

    came after a long time as this site was bit messed up in between.

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea

    This is an amazing poem i must say gem!
    -----------------------------------------------
    aww thanks hunny
    yea a month after is sorta weird
    and when i read your poem over again
    i was like was that for a reason?
    knowing me i will dwell on it
    its something that i have always done
    especially with my dad and everything.
    I knew the pain wasn't going to get better
    in a month but we have to remember
    that it does get better over time
    and we can't go living our lives wishing
    they were with us again. our nanas
    are in a better place sweetie.
    i am here to help you through
    comment back please
    <3333
    xx.chelsea.xx

  • Great poem. It was well written. Good job 5/5