Bravo! *claps* that was so wonderful. i too had problems with my mom. in my poems or in my words when i would fight with my mom i would say the same thing in this poem. i loved this poem; i relate myself to thi alot. keep writing
-Stephanie

Instead of using ellipsis' why don't you use commas? I think that that's the only problem here. You over use these WAY too much.

make sure you check out that link I gave you. It'll help you understand a lot better.