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by xfAdInGxaWaYx Feb 14, 2007 category : Sadness, depression / lost relationships
Your lips on mine The feeling so fine Nothing else matters But soon it will be in tatters Love's embrace Is wonderful to taste But consequence is soon to come To ruin all the fun The common mistake He was a fake And I believed him But it was just a fling I gave myself up I thought I was tough I knew it would happen And still I allowed to be taken But desperately I wanted to believe That I was more to him here Again I was wrong He used me all along Now where are you girl? Lost in the coldness of the world You're gone and defeated Come away and leave it He won't be back There is something you lack Now will you learn? That love will only burn
by Sara
This was soo good!.. i loved it!1...thanks for the comment btw haha...5/5 from me!
by David
Well i must say that you should try to write differently, like rhyme it differently. i hope i am not sounding cruel. just a hint to try something new. thats all. 5/5 David