Secret Admirer

by Kurt   Feb 14, 2007


I'm a secret of sort
'Cause I admire you
I stay hidden away
Protecting the truth

I like to write this
To make you think
If maybe I'm the kid
Over by the sink

Perhaps, I'm right there
Or across the room
There isn't enough revealed
For you to assume

I dare not say I love you
'Cause we're not close enough
But I do hope I can
Be your diamond in the rough

If you haven't found me
You should have at the start
Stop following the poem
And listen to your heart

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  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    Awww. I loved this poem, like loved loved loved it. :D It was so cute, especially..the ending. Lol.
    You did a great job, once again.
    Are you on my favorites?
    I hope so.

    Keep it up. :D
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    "I'm a secret of sort
    'Cause I admire you
    I stay hidden away
    Protecting the truth"

    ^ I think this is my favorite stanza. I think it reflects not only the typical secret admirer, but myself as well. It just struck a chord in my heart. I like the rest of the poem as well. Although the second stanza confused me a little, but once I read the rest it made perfect sense. It is very beautifully written; I hope to read more from you!

  • 17 years ago

    by Run out of words

    Throughout the poem, I was engrossed. Well, infact in the beginning I was sort of confused, but the title sort of made it clearer for me. But by the time I got to the end, I really liked it. I love the way it when poems are reffered to in the poems. Keep writing, your poems are too good for words to describe:).

  • 17 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    This poem is so awesome i like it

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalyan Ky

    Hey thanks for your comment. It was very encouraging. I agree with Raychii! This poem was super cute and sweet. I really like your style. It's a lovely refreshing read.