Wnderful to Love.........and Trust someone.....rising in Love.....so poetically.....

Welcome back, am so sorry couldnt read it before, this site is totally messed up nowdays.

You hvnt lost a inch of ur magic and its really nice to have u back, though i guess u hv lost ur regular readers...but u'll surely get them back.

I hope this time u will stay for a longer time on this site.. :o))

all the best and take care

Very sweet romantic poem. Nice to see you back.

I'd walk miles to be with you
I'd live in a dream just to make it come true
whatever pleases your heart, soul and mind that I will do
I can't help it, even if I wanted to
I'm falling more and more in love with you.

Good job. I really liked this stanza the most.

Love the write, nicely done!!!

I'd walk miles to be with you
I'd live in a dream just to make it come true
whatever pleases your heart, soul and mind that I will do
I can't help it, even if I wanted to
I'm falling more and more in love with you.

Breathtaking. You have amazing talent. I look forward to more writings and I've added you to my fav.

If ever I could find the words to tell my fiance how I feel it would be these. Beautifully expressed emotion in this piece.

Oh the love in this poem was excellent. i lvoed it. my heart is beating really fast. trully awesome.

5/5 David

The way I feel I just can't explain
there's a music in my heart
that beats with the melody of your name
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this was really grrrr88!!
I loved those lines & the ending the most..
I know this would be tooooooo late..but lately I hvn't been reading ANY poems or even writing..Idk if I quit..its hard to decide since I already miss writing =(

anyway ur piece was v romantic..expressed ur true love..i hope its true :D :D
wish u the best hun
miss ya
xxxxxx

Like how you compare love with things like the ocean, music etc. it shows how deep your love is.

Great writing and superbe flow