by beav Feb 14, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Zombies in the streets |
I love the action, just work on the vocab a bit. 4/5. Good work! |
Lol zombies need love too!!! haha i absolutely love this. it rocked |
by Jenni
Haha, i loved this! I love your writing style, it's so unique. This poem is a little morbid and I think that's why I enjoyed it that much! great job! 5/5 |
Interesting... the strucuture was good here ... the words were simple but still you got your point across of how much you love zonbies.. lol.. i love how you say zombies need love too .. clever ... great job! |
by LadyPearl
Good poem, not your best. It was repetitive in words and content. Keep it up |