You have a very valid point...people should show their love more than 1 day a year. nicely done!

WHOA! It spells Valentines Day! AW! That's so cool! I didn't even notice that at first! =D "Even edible roses" that made me laugh! I love those edible roses! I only ever had... one, but I think I bought that for myself.. How sad! lol. Great poem, Joe! Keep it up!!!! lol.

~~Teres

Hum. Well Joe, i have to say, i dont think this is your best. but i do really like it.

The probs-
sweat ---sweet .. lol. unless you mean a sweaty treat. xD
It doesn't make sense, that
No one does this everyday for their love
this part slightly confused me. i had to read it a few times to get what you were saying.

Also- the DAY part, was.. odd. because the lines were so long. it like took away from the acrostic!

But i loved the message, and it was well written, i just kinda think you could have done better.... o.o

xLauren

Yay!! Finally, someone else who agrees with me!!! Valentine's day should be everyday! Well...you know...people should give/get roses, chocolates and love everyday. Not just one specific day. I loved this write, Joe. 5/5

-` Liz

That was a great Acrostic poem, so true and powerful. I hope to hear more from you. -Melly

Aw,great poem.
I love Valentines Day.
well...5/5

~Chelsea