This is a really good poem... One of your best (I think). keep writing poems and share them with me whenever you get the chance. I love all of your poems, They are all really great. And Im not saying that just because you are one of my best friends. I really mean it!
~Nicole~

Aww like its exactly how i felt after broke up! Could not brought out better! so amazing poem:) Keep strong and everything will get better :) Thank you for this poem.

Cute play on words; again you tap into my past feelings. It's one of those poems I can picture myself writing; I hope you take that as a compliment lol.

Nicely written!

~Richi~

Very very good. I like this one a lot!

This was a well structured poem, I loved the flow and the emotion carried it all the way to the end I really enjoyed this alot great job I gave it a 5

Aww this poem is so sad!!!
i love it!
all your poems are amazing!!!!
=]
--Jess

Sorry to sya but i found this poem a bit cliche and i didnt really find something i really liked about it. sorry but im gonna give you a 2.5 :(

You know, I think you will make a wonderful poet someday. But many of the poems I've read have the same misstep...the meter is just a bit off. Conquer this and there is no doubt you will do fine work. I love what you write since I feel your passion in your words.

Wow, incredible poem. Every stanza is powerful but third and fourth are greatest.
Well done, good topic and great wording. 5/5

Great in a sad way :)
I remember when I was in the "sad poems" section. That was long ago, but now I'm in the love poems section!
Lol things change with time.

Wow. i think im gonna cry. i kno how this feels. great poem <33333333

Wow..very nice poem..i use to be able to relate to this poem.i've felt the same way before...

i think you should change "wanna" to want to.. it just might read better..i think there are three or four lines that have that in it.

overall good job.5/5

The flow was a little off but i cant down vote you for that. i loved it 5/5. still it is one of the best of yours i think i read. nicely penned