by Jenni Feb 14, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I just felt the weight of the world fall, |
Wow this is awesome! I love how your made it all work together. Two thumbs up! |
Haha..this is awesome, i love the poems that tell such a descriptive story...you get a very vivid image in your head, amazing work |
I loved this!! it was so original! especially this bit, |
by Cory
I really like this. |
by amoxi
This was a great poem a lot of emotion and i thought it was very well written 5/5 |