I can really feel the hurt in this poem Courtz and I really like the way you've expressed yourself. |
by Tricky Daze
A so sad story but don't forget nobody's life is perfect,my dad did the same for a younger woman than my mom,and please don't worry just think these are some exams you should take in life to grow,and please smile even worst comes to you,i explained that kind of things but i hope its not ur real story,for you not to worry,have a nice day honey |
It's hard watching somebody step into your place, you feel like your not what matters anymore. I'm glad you handled the situation like an adult. Great poem 5/5 |
Good poem. The flow was good and the emotion was shown. |