Comments : Until The End of Forever

  • 17 years ago

    by likethewind

    WOW! i LOVE it!

    You are my heart, I am your armour
    We shine when we're together
    It never gets old to say everyday
    That I love you until the end of forever

    i love the sound of that part. 5/5 great work!

    yours always
    oxoxLIKETHEWINDxoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Wow what a person to write a poem like this about a girl. I think amny girls owuld like to be your gf i wish my bf wasnt so dopy maybe then he would write me something as beautiful. It doesnt need fixing or changing its sweet and pure leave it like that yer

    xxx alex xxx