Omg,
that is so good....

i love this poem so much because it is how I am feeling right now, thanks alot in that short poem you just sorted out how I feel and what I should feel,
your an amazing poet, one suggestion, set the poem out nicely because it would make it so much better.. It has feeling, feeling deserve to be set out nice to be respected. Good good work,
kac xx

Awosme poem destiny its how i felt before! love it so much

I KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN, THATS WHATS HAPPENING RIGHT NOW!!!! with this guy, but he has a gf and he says to me "once its over im all urs i prmose" but like am i suppose to wait? i love him and all but i dont think i could cause i feel so last resorted and the other serious guy i loved we were together for half a yr and then he just broke up with me over something stupid i really love him and imiss him so much but now i cant even talk to him because i feel so heart broken when i talk to him ...
but great poem i love it ur so good at making the feeling the right one!
=)