Very nice sarah, its a very good poem, maybe one of your best. Sandro

Sarah, This poem was so deep..I have no clue if it's true or not. But There is so much emotion in this poem It nearly made me cry. The bit that stood out was the very beginning because you where talking about if he was watching you and how you've grown up..Keep up the amazing work!! I loved this poem!! xoxroxyxox

Wow.. i have butterflies girl!! good emotion!! and choice of word!! 5/5

I love the emotion behind this poem it is like looking in your heart

Jamie

Great poem! It was well written.

Hey i miss hearing from ya!! i really like the poem, it is soo sad though. 5 outta 5. one suggestion though,
change the second that to that's in this section: "and that you argued with God,
and that why I'm alive."
keep it up.

Wow, just breathtaking..i loved it all, and i can relate to it a lot...

Dad, what's it like
to live in the sky?
and when i feel that rain on me...
is that when you cry?

-*-. just simple amazing, and that was totally a good opening stanza that just caught my atention.-*-.

----tara

This is adorable, and so touching.
well done =]
xoxoxox
Geo